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I Hate When You Smell Like Cigarettes

I Hate When You Smell Like Cigarettes

     It's on your painted walls at home
It's in your toothbrush, it's on your comb
It's just lingering through your house
It seriously consumes your mouth

It settles on your favorite chair
It's deeply rooted in your hair
It clings to all your cars interior
And your perfume becomes inferior

It settles on your poor sweet dog
It fills the room your in with fog
It's on your fingers in your clothes
In your ash tray's, up your nose
 
If you can't see what it has done
Don't ask me to be the one
I Love you so but don't forget
I hate when you smell like a cigarette 

2020

 

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linda lank

well put straight to the heart of the matter i am an x smoker 35 yrs. ago like the write keep writing 
Linda .p.s. God Bless i went cold turkey what wake up call lol

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Tony Taylor

Hello CHARLES!!...this is such a great choice of subject matter to write on.....you've done everyone a big service by sharing this with everyone fortunate enough to read it.......It is VERY well penned my dear poet brother!!......ALL STARS!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo  : )

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Popop Rifici

Shoot to the moon Tony, Thanks
Love and Rockets to you my friend
Whatever that is

in my pocket i hope

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Being Me

Great write that makes me feel really bad...in a good way because it should. I should really give up the habit. I only smoke outside but even so...eurgh!  I really should give up...but I just can't. Not yet. Not while I still feel broken inside. 

Thanks for writing this and giving me another reason to seriously try and just stop the horrible habit x

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Popop Rifici

I love to lite up too but only use the medical stuff now. Best  of luck it's hard to break that habit i did. and I smell great now. thanks Being you good luck to you. Life is much cleaner without the smoke and ashes everywhere....

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Greg Etsell

GREAT poem i quit 2 times
it was very hard both times 
and i havent had smoked in 22
years and dont ewant to 
and cant stand the smell 

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