Poem -
I have made love
I have made love
you were the one for me.
You saw the confusions
Hiding in my heart and
Took me to visit yours.
We made love andÂ
you showed me theÂ
Moon and stars falling
like beautiful rains from
.the summer skies.
You removed the fencesÂ
that had kept me
In my childhood.
Showed me the planets
Untouched and full
of possibilities.
Should I neverÂ
find this intensity
And passion in theÂ
lovers yet to come.
I shall know this.
I have made love.
And have seen theÂ
Moon stars falling to earth
on a spangled summer night.
Ahhhhhh the first time... JudeÂ
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Hi  Jude beautiful love poemÂ
romantic also .. The words readÂ
as a first love.. one`s we never forget
So well written with so much feelingÂ
within the versesÂ
warm regards Debs
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Hello Jude...
Could you please tell me...
Is this is a hearts journey?
Journey of the heart?Â
A beautiful dedication to...
Your heart magnet!
Beautiful write!Â
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs and Smiles!Â
sparrowsongÂ
Hello Jude,
Your beautifully written poem, reminds me of a lovely song from the 1960's by Roberta Flack, "The First Time Ever". You have captured the essence of young innocence, and one's journey into adulthood. Very well said.
Hugs, Peace and Love,
xox