Poem -
I knew you had to be mine.
A look
some words spoken
A shy smile and I knew you had to be mine
Hands touch
Minds meet
You swept me off my feet
Sweet nights, great days
Kisses goodbye
Butterflys when we meet
Time pasted
Our love was made to last
Angry words
A cross look
Eyes roll to heaven
Tears cried
We touch hands
My heart melts
Silly together, forever and ever.x
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Angry words are often spoken in jest, Only lasting love can stand the test of time and the test of breaking up. Nicely put - - THanks William
PS:- thats - thanks to you louise - Nice poem
You right William Thanks - it is a Beautiful verse - Nicely Put -
Hi Louise a beautiful romantic poem and love the image as well congrats x
Thanks for all comments, so grateful. This was on a secound time around love :) Oh well youth is wasted on the young, so they say. :)
Hello Louise,
She could not have been any surer than the complete openness in her love she presented him in this poem. Truly more than just a prelude to what was to come, for the both of them, for an entire life time..Great poem by a great poetess....
Kindest regards,
Jimmy
Hi Jimmy :)
Thank you for your comment on my poem, I am very grateful. I have never been called a poetess before :) but i like the sound of it, so im thinking of keeping it...lol..:)
Hope you have a good weekend. Take care of you.
Kindest regards,
Louise. :)
Hello Louise,
You are quite welcome and your poem was absolute and very poetic to the eyes and to the ears as always and you are a great one at that, poetess Louise Carroll. You have a great one as well...
Cheers,
Jim
Awh touching :-):-) x
Thanks Laura :) x