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This is a very well constructed poem of cause and with results, "damaging affects."Ā  Not only are you a stronged will lady, lil sis, you produce very "powerful life experience poetry," and never have you allowed any of your deliveries, to be without life's lessons to be (firely learned) nor a nemesis in your poetry.. Presented with strength/ elegance, in its delivery...Bro. JimĀ 

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