Poem -

I Love You Mummy x

"from a scitzaphrenic mother"

I Love You Mummy x

I love you mummy
Please don't shout
it's making me sad 
Now I feel I can't cry out. 

I love you mummy 
Please don't curse
I'm only a child 
& inside it hurts. 

I love you mummy, 
Please don't ignore me, 
I just learnt to talk
& now I feel silly. 

I love you mummy 
Please don't be sad
I can't make u happy
& that makes me feel bad. 

I love you mummy
Please don't cry
It's not nice to see
& I don't know why. 

I love you mummy 
Please don't smack
I'm a little boy
Who can't hit back. 

I love you mummy
Please keep me clean
I want to comb my hair 
So all the boys & girls can see. 

I love you munmy
Please don't forget
I need to clean my teeth
They say they can smell my breathe. 

I love you mummy
Please hurry up
I don't want to be late
As everybody looks.

I love you mummy
Please, look at me
I'm a big boy now 
Aren't you proud to see. 

I love you mummy
Please don't silence me
As its hard enough 
Cos I stutter when I speak. 

I love you mummy
Please be nice, 
Cause I love you once, 
I love you twice, 
I love you more than beans & rice.

x

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Marion

Such a powerful write. Mental health is a cruel affliction and we often forget the terrible effect on family and friends also. I have a family member who suffers terribly and so do we...hugs ?

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Being Me

OMG...this is awesome. I like the way "I love you mummy" is used against the negative treatment by the mother. And the last verse just brings tears to the eyes. All that little boy goes through and yet he still says that...because he DOES love her. Mental illness severely affects the nearest and dearest. You have written an awesome awareness write, here. Very well done x

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Lauren Webster

This is a true story of my own, I wrote it originally to beat it, I thought if I could write it from my sons point of view then i could beat it and it worked slowly but surely a year on I'm finally making progress, the last verse is something we actually say before bed every night, even when I read this myself I fill up so to hear that people understand in a wy they can feel my emotion throughout it means the absolute world, thankyou so much xx

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Lauren Webster

Awwwww thankyou for taking the time to read it, means the world to me x
 

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Yiyan Han

I love you once, 
I love you twice, 
I love you more than beans & rice.

What a love! Ode to you!

Ps. It's heartbroken when a loved one becomes unable to distinguish their own thoughts and ideas from reality.

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