Poem -
i will be there with you in dying
simple words?
i will still be with you in dying
every last breath
inhaled......
exhaled......
i will be with you
the many thousand steps you walk
i will be with you right next to you
i will hold your hand
as tight as i can
never letting go nor loose......
as she sit there looking a bit worried
like her world had stopped
and nothing is alive
nor exist anymore
i wanted to talk to her some more
but my instinct remained as it should be
to continue in my way ..
but then she reach out
calling me closer
tears in her eyes ..
and whispering in my ears she said...
''i too will be there with you in dying''
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Hey Sir LORRIS!!
I REALLY like this piece....it's VERY creative and so easy to relate to.....but what I liked the most was its STELLAR phrasing that runs throughout this most original piece!! ~ ALL STARS!! & PINNED.......Well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered my friend!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo : )
Thank you Tony
Thanks for sharing that ! It brought deep thoughts.
Thank you Jim