Poem -
I Will Go
I will go
Because...
I was once numb
The world was
But a cycle repeated
And dumb was I to play
The game that
Everyone played
Estranged was my thumb
...For it became
The reason I was able
To work jobs, that I hated
Pick flowers for cold women
With no love
I still dated
Write papers on odd topics
I didn't care but
Still debated
Write reports on
Two bugs
With no love
But still mated
Until my rescue day
Was fated
She saved my heart
And soul
So when she cries
My name
Yes..I will go
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Comments
Feeling it...
Great Write Curious...
Love your style Brother...
sparrowsong
Hey Sparrowsong, thanks for stopping by, I'm glad you could feel this one that means a lot
Thanks a bunch my feather bound friend
Curious Onlooker
Such depth and freshness to this poem, Curious, loyalty responsibility love woven into a beautiful tapestry on display, you tapped into the heartbeat of why a man (or woman) commits and sacrifices their skin and all they have for another, and begin to unravel the meaning of humility, love sacrifice purpose and true happiness as well; with one poem, wow men that is beyond impressive, this has many layers to explore, it's a thing of rare beauty....top of the food chain work, my friend
Your words do me too much, thank you for reading and enjoying this, it's merely but an addition to an ongoing experiment, once again your support goes miles
Much love, CO
Onlooker!!......this is tight bro!!...........smokin' ass grooves!...........loved the pic too!!............Love and Rockets!!.............T xo
Thanks big brother T, like before this this is an experiment so any feedback negative or positive is all welcome
Much love, CO