Poem -

Chat Up Lies

                                                                       I don’t wish to stare
                                                                but don’t want to blink either ..

                                                               Through some irrational fear
                                                           of losing a single moment of you ..

                                                                    And while I don’t wish
                                                           to teach my granny to suck eggs ..

                                                             These words, as an icebreaker,
                                                    at singles events, bus stops or parties etc ..

                                                                    Tend to work far better
                                                     than anything else, I have tried to date ..

 

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Marion

I read this as quite cryptic in meaning
I don't really get an image of you scoring at a bus stop lol ( though good on you if you did 🤩) think these delightful thoughts you've written here might be about the power of poetry or the written word itself...
there again i could be reading far too much into it...X
 

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Neville

I would love to be able to say the only place I have NEVA scored is on the football pitch .. but I would be lying .. but you are neva totally off target Marion so give yourself a ( ............ ) feel free to enter your own prize on the dotted line .. and here's a x from yours truly :) x

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Marion

😄😄😊😆 

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The fish of the sea

I shall try this one out! I've got nothing else to lose!! Haha enjoyed Neville well polished.

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Neville

Revised so many times .. Cheers 

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