Poem -
I would speed to your door...
I would climb mountains to be by your side... dive the deepest blue oceans,,, swim against the tide,,, there is absolutely nothing that I wouldn’t do... to be embraced in your loving arms lying with you...
Amidst the stormiest of seas... I would steer my boat... with my bowed wooden stern I’d be able to float... the South westerly wind would blow my fine sails..betwixt mermaids, dolphins & big humpbacked whales...
When I’d reached your homelands I would moor at your shore... with my anchor on tbe seabed... I would speed to your door... wrapping you up in my warm tender care...then I’d ask you to marry me & live with you there...
Comments
Wow!! JILL!!.... this is such a beautifully delivered declaration of Love!!..... Using metaphor and touching imagery to color the excellent rhythm and the heartbeat of a poem that begs to be read aloud!!.....VERY creative and Highly original touches throughout this VERY well crafted Love Poem!!.......ALL STARS!! & PINNED!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo. : )
Hi Jill! What a cool metaphorical write with vocabulary words to describe a ship's journey to love...I like seeing you do a romantic write. You used very creative terminology and I got the feeling of urgency to love and to be embraced. I don't think we EVER lose that need to be held and loved. Great write. xo ;)
Wow Thank you so
much Tony ❤️💙
Thank you so much 💕💕💕