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IF I DIDN'T CHOOSE HEAVEN

IF I DIDN'T CHOOSE HEAVEN

Hidden deep within me, the adrenalin could be ready to explode...

The choice is mine with nothing to lose...

If I turned my back on my God, the hurt side of me would care nothing at all...

I would live for only myself and if I lose my freedom I would wait patiently on death row...

If Lucifer is real he would take my soul...

If there's no Heaven and no hell there's nothing that keeps me in check, nothing at all...

I wouldn't take my time to try to understand or love anyone...

The Mafia may want me to join them but, that would make me family and I wouldn't need anyone but, me...

I could probably ride with The Hells Angels but, I would be too much trouble and too much of a risk on the road...

I would be so unpredictable and in a turn of a hat I would feed the wolves with live human remains...

If I didn't choose Heaven, I really would admire that side of me...

If you ask me why that's my choice, maybe we'd agree that it's good to have that place for me to want to go...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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Nigel Cresswell...

Sparrowsong this is a really hard one for me to comment on. The hells angels are true organised crime and yet I have called many of them friend. Some still call me friend. Ever since the eighties I have prayed they do not find out that even back then I was on the side of true angels and we hadΒ  to know if they were going to use affiliation with the Californian Angels to sell guns to the IRA.

I have typed this now sparrow so I have to decide.
It's been thirty years and I am tired.
Time to publish comment.
Hope and hugs Sparrowsong
Nigel

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Tony Taylor

You are so friggin' cool FEATHERS!!.....I haven't been around for a while...... but I gotta say I really missed you and your poetic styling...... this is such a cleverly considered and delivered write!! ~

Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β  ~ "I could probably join the Hells Angels but
Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β  I would be too much trouble and too much
Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β  Of a risk on the road....."

LOL!! LOL!!........ you are a bona-fide trip girlfriend!!......I LOVE it!!....NEVER change sweetheart!!...... you're the Real-Deal!!......PINNED!!........stay groovy!!.......hugs n smiles!!...... your ever-friend and admirer!!.......T xo ?✴❀

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al Bikaadi

I loved it so much! Thank you... just one small feedback... I felt the last two words here could have been cut out (too repetitive)Β 

"I wouldn't take my time to try to understand or love anyone at all..."

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sparrowsong

Hello Nigel...

There's another biker group who claim they're worse than The Hells Angels but, I can't think of it...

I met someone who was joining years ago and yeah I wouldn't want to be a part of that one...

Thirty years already?

Thank you for your kind comment and generous support!

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Hugs...

sparrowsong

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sparrowsong

Hello Tony...

Thank you very much for your very kind comment and Glad you enjoyed!

Thank you for the smiles my friend!

Hugs and Smiles!

Feathers

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sparrowsong

Hello Al...

I wasn't sure about it either...

​​​​​I fixed it...

Thank you very much for your kind comment and support!

Thank you for the helpful tip!

Glad you enjoyed!

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Hugs...

sparrowsong

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sparrowsong

Hello Poetess...

When I die and if I find out there really isn't I'm coming back mad as hell!!

All this time I could have been mayhem...

WHAT!!

Talk about being lied to and ripped off all these years...

I'm definitely claiming a return ticket to the World...

Glad you enjoyed!

Thank you for your kind comment and support!

Hugs...

Little Sparrow

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