If I Lost His Beautiful Heart
Dear Lord, please save me
I cannot feel, I cannot see
I feel as if, I am drowning in a poisonous gas
My skin feels as if it is being sliced open by broken glass
I can't have another woman take him from me
It will completely destroy me
Honestly I miss you, so freaking bad
Though, I worship the moments we had
If I lost you, my heart officially dies
Can you hear my soul, as it cries?
You still love me, I know you do
Have you found someone else? I have no clue
Ahhh, i just don't know
Why for you my heart continues to grow
Overflowing with burning hot love, oh please do not let my love go
The love I feel for you, is probably the strongest I will ever know
Earlier your voice sounded so sad, I felt pure loneliness
As if your life only offered you emptiness,Â
Oh you have absolutely no clue
How deeply I care about you
This distance, is taring me apart
I realize I should of offered you my entire heart, from the very start
But, I could not see if you would love me, or use me
But you threw chains over my heart, I cannot break free
Dear Lord, please save me
He is all I feel, he is all I see
I need this man so badly, that it is destroying me
I believe him and I are meant to be, Lord you must bring him to me
Not only in my dreams, but in my arms right now
Oh I must retrieve his love, some way some how
I need to be in his arms, right here right now
So please Lord, I beg that you help me some way some how
My heart and soul sing a lonely melody
Because he is not showing me his love now
If I have actually lost his beautiful heartÂ
Just watch, as my own completely falls apart
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Melissa ~ it has been a pleasure watching you develop and gain more confidence over the past month or so...........you are expressing yourself SO very well & improving with each write.........your comments to others on this site have become my favorite insight into the writer that you are aiming at becoming........one of my favorite quotes is "To read, is to write, to have written! "...........you my friend, are learning in leaps and bounds and it's a pleasure to behold............the COSMO family has become a better place because of your presence..........keep up the good work my friend...........hugs-n-smiles...........T xo
Awwww... Thanks T!!! You have no clue how privileged I feel over this comment!!! You guys completely made my day today.... I too love that quote.... we all need inspirations to write, or for that matter achieve anything for that matter... You really think COSMO has become a better place with my presence? Thank you very much Tony!! xox
Sincerely,Â
Melissa <3
Melissa Caron
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Lovely write, my applause, my vote
Regards
WILLIE
Melissa, incredible outpouring of emotion, breathtaking man, you're truly busting up this poetry genre; my heart was beating wildly at some point in this poem; omg! you're seriously good now....no more fooling for the poet Melissa Caron;  you got your own unique style; be proud....top of the food chain writing
Thank you, Chris. I don't know why but your comments always seem so encouraging :)Â