Poem -

I'm Leaving

I'm Leaving

I'm leaving

You wont notice

Too busy looking good

Wish it was for me

But it's all about you

You have something of mine

I don't want it back

Hot and cold don't mix

Tired of stumbling over fantasy

Tired from constructing fairy tales

Tired, so tired, numb, bitter, and tired

I'm leaving

You wont care

You have no strings attached

Direct the anger elsewhere

Find another hapless victim

Probably have several targets

You always get what you want

I'm leaving

You wont remember

I'm a stranger

Who thought he knew

Knew he found it

It was perfect

Perfect poison

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BLOSSOM

Stephen had a different direction recently in my writing, started to feel quite staid at times with the way I wrote.  Got some really 'lucky', very experienced advise off someone and it has helped me re-evaluate a little bit of my direction and thoughts.   I only state this because I feel sadly in times gone by would not have truly appreciated how good this write was.  Hence my explanation lol!!  I am totally with Iman, once again, and think this is brilliant!  Loved it, simply the words and lines you chose and the structure in which you place them to depict your emotions are bang on (sorry I know not very poetic but couldn't think of another description lol!)  A big vote and nom from me:)

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Stephen Weyant

Rachel

im not sure what to say! (a problem I often have, ha ha)

I am honored to receive such a compliment! I regard your work as elite, a favorite of mine for sure.

ive not spent as much time on the last few works ive done! they've been more of a spew of emotion, a vomit of feelings! but its a release of sorts!

thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment

I wish you the best

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BLOSSOM

Stephen, that is a huge problem with any writer, despite at times we have far too much to say, then we dry up and don't have anything to say lol!!  Your compliments are head swelling but I will accept them willingly ha ha ha!!  Seriously, a good spew of emotion is GOOD, I have learnt that, releasing your thoughts in a relatively controlled manner is not only cathartic but poetic!!   I like your style of write very much, keep em coming:)

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

This poem seems to be very amazing, Good style and expression, Congrats, Thanks for sharing and posting, Regards WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

I'm leaving

You wont remember

I'm a stranger

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Stephen Weyant

thank you williamsji!

I appreciate you taking time to read and comment

hope you are well

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Surabhi Saxena

Perfect piece ..Great and an awesome write up...!!! Well deserved nom..:) 
Keep writing
Regards
Surabhi

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Stephen Weyant

hello surabhi

thank you very much! I am grateful for your comments!

wish you well!

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

My applause and congrats on your winning nomination

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Carey Milton

Stephen..You have once again delivered an awesome write!

Smack..Bang...To the point!  Love how you deliver your words as always hun..congrats! x:)

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Stephen Weyant

hey carey

hope you are well!

thanks for the comment, I always appreciate it!

think the road in the pic leads to that hill im trying to find! ha ha!

wish you the best!

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Stephen Weyant

hello susan!

how have you been? i hope all is well!

thanks for checking me out! i appreciate you!

wish you the best!

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Stephen Weyant

thank you there holli!

glad you joined the site! lol

wish you well

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