I'm Leaving

I'm leaving
You wont notice
Too busy looking good
Wish it was for me
But it's all about you
You have something of mine
I don't want it back
Hot and cold don't mix
Tired of stumbling over fantasy
Tired from constructing fairy tales
Tired, so tired, numb, bitter, and tired
I'm leaving
You wont care
You have no strings attached
Direct the anger elsewhere
Find another hapless victim
Probably have several targets
You always get what you want
I'm leaving
You wont remember
I'm a stranger
Who thought he knew
Knew he found it
It was perfect
Perfect poison
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Stephen had a different direction recently in my writing, started to feel quite staid at times with the way I wrote. Got some really 'lucky', very experienced advise off someone and it has helped me re-evaluate a little bit of my direction and thoughts. I only state this because I feel sadly in times gone by would not have truly appreciated how good this write was. Hence my explanation lol!! I am totally with Iman, once again, and think this is brilliant! Loved it, simply the words and lines you chose and the structure in which you place them to depict your emotions are bang on (sorry I know not very poetic but couldn't think of another description lol!) A big vote and nom from me:)
Rachel
im not sure what to say! (a problem I often have, ha ha)
I am honored to receive such a compliment! I regard your work as elite, a favorite of mine for sure.
ive not spent as much time on the last few works ive done! they've been more of a spew of emotion, a vomit of feelings! but its a release of sorts!
thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment
I wish you the best
Stephen, that is a huge problem with any writer, despite at times we have far too much to say, then we dry up and don't have anything to say lol!! Your compliments are head swelling but I will accept them willingly ha ha ha!! Seriously, a good spew of emotion is GOOD, I have learnt that, releasing your thoughts in a relatively controlled manner is not only cathartic but poetic!! I like your style of write very much, keep em coming:)
thanks so much rachel
I am grateful!
This poem seems to be very amazing, Good style and expression, Congrats, Thanks for sharing and posting, Regards WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
thank you williamsji!
I appreciate you taking time to read and comment
hope you are well
Perfect piece ..Great and an awesome write up...!!! Well deserved nom..:)
Keep writing
Regards
Surabhi
hello surabhi
thank you very much! I am grateful for your comments!
wish you well!
My applause and congrats on your winning nomination
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Stephen..You have once again delivered an awesome write!
Smack..Bang...To the point! Love how you deliver your words as always hun..congrats! x:)
hey carey
hope you are well!
thanks for the comment, I always appreciate it!
think the road in the pic leads to that hill im trying to find! ha ha!
wish you the best!
stephen its all been said brilliant x
hello susan!
how have you been? i hope all is well!
thanks for checking me out! i appreciate you!
wish you the best!
BEAUTIFULLY PUT
thank you there holli!
glad you joined the site! lol
wish you well