Poem - 27 July 2021, 04:56

Immersion

Immersion.
Wrapped up.
Enfolded.
Surrounds.
Spirit
enveloped.
Immersed
in the
all around.
Dealing with
what is
shown.
Nothing
more to
see.
Confined
to this
place.
Force fed
what is.
What is
seen, sensed.
Reality.
Dealing with
imposed
reality.
Dialed up.
Dialed up
reality.
Operating
within
rules.
Functioning
with what’s
supplied.
Spinning
up narrowly.
One realm
at a
time.

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Gwendoline27 July 2021, 05:01

Feels like there is no escape from the forced reality thrown upon us. That’s what I felt reading this one John. Another good write
Gwen :)

John Prophet27 July 2021, 12:37

Thank you Gwen..

Being Me27 July 2021, 05:32

Reality can feel like we are imprisoned at times when really we are imprisoned only through our own mind. Great work as always John x

John Prophet27 July 2021, 12:37

Thank you BM..

Tony Taylor27 July 2021, 10:33

"Dealing with imposed reality."......."One realm at a time.".......I Love it JP!!....it begs the kind of conversation most of us never find a friend to have with......for the implications frighten the many......but obviously, not ALL of us!!......Compelling as usual brother!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo : )

John Prophet27 July 2021, 12:33

Thank you Tony.

Most are too wrapped up in their own existence to contemplate such things.

Pratibha Savani27 July 2021, 11:26

Great epic piece! Setting the scene that there is more than one reality and version of worlds. Love it! Px

John Prophet27 July 2021, 12:34

Thank you PS..

The fish of the sea27 July 2021, 19:24

Hi John, as always I really enjoyed your intrinsic message behind your words. This one especially has a unique rhythm to it that was so deeply engaging, I especially enjoyed this part;