Poem - 25 November 2020, 01:11 Immortal Jim "The Lad" .... I am immortal, until it is time for me to go, And then no one can stop it, And then I am immortal. Like 8 Pin it 0 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 1393 Rating: Total votes: 7 Tags: Immortality Poetry Genre: Prose Romance Topic: Triumph Listed in: Contest Entries 12 comments
The fish of the sea25 November 2020, 03:00 Clever Jim! I think I have a lot of catching up to do one poems... started with yours! Kind regards, your friend Max Reply
Jim "The Lad" ....25 November 2020, 15:45 Always excited to see your thoughts Being Me, and it's wonderful when we agree!...........Jim Reply
Jim "The Lad" ....25 November 2020, 15:42 Wasn't going for that Yiyan but thanks for pointing that out! you are a very creative thinker! thank you!.......Jim Reply
sparrowsong25 November 2020, 06:27 Hello Jim... Until you come back again... Interesting write! Thank you for sharing... sparrowsong Reply
Pratibha Savani25 November 2020, 14:26 Hey Jim a philosophical write. I love them. Starting and ending with the first word!! Px💜 Reply
Jim "The Lad" ....25 November 2020, 15:19 Pratibha ! your writes are cool! I appreciate you and your comments!.............Jim Reply
Jim "The Lad" ....26 November 2020, 10:36 Thank You Marion! I like the owl analogy! lol!................Jim Reply
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Clever Jim! I think I have a lot of catching up to do one poems... started with yours! Kind regards, your friend Max
Thank You Max!.....Jim
Like your thinking on this one, Jim x
Always excited to see your thoughts Being Me, and it's wonderful when we agree!...........Jim
Haiku? Nearly, Jim. Philosophical man ;))
Wasn't going for that Yiyan but thanks for pointing that out! you are a very creative thinker! thank you!.......Jim
Hello Jim...
Until you come back again...
Interesting write!
Thank you for sharing...
sparrowsong
Thank You sparrowsong!
Hey Jim a philosophical write. I love them. Starting and ending with the first word!! Px💜
Pratibha ! your writes are cool! I appreciate you and your comments!.............Jim
Wise words Jim....short sweet and deep 🤗
Thank You Marion! I like the owl analogy! lol!................Jim