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IN THE GLOAMING

When I saw it
It was bedraggled, unkept
It looked at me softly
It's soft eyes so sad
A fleeting connection
One thing good
In the bad

And there on the hilltop, in the
gloaming at dusk
The valleys stretched out in the
endless below
I felt the earth shift on its
desolate axis
And I sat down and cried
For all I didn't know

And the sky etched my tears
into streaks of red hue
And the wind whispered back
with deep darkening blue
On a hilltop, in the gloaming
Lonely valleys below
And I sat down and cried
for all I couldn't know

And I watched that old fox
as it hobbled away, and I ached
for that fox to stay with me, just
stay
But it looked at me softly
It's soft eyes so sad
A fleeting connection
One good thing, in the bad

M P 17/8/21

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Liliana of the ...

One good thing in the bad.
I sat down and cried for all I didn't know.Β 
Arielle familiar with me.Β 
Wonderful write love.Β 

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Marion

Thanks Liliana...hugs πŸ’–

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Gwendoline

Heavy hearted reflecting I felt in this one. Where we have to conclude we just won’t be allowed to know πŸ’— achingly sad x

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Marion

Thankyou lovely lady...Great to see you on POP...so chuffed that you have joined us...loads of hugs πŸ’•πŸ’•

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Being Me

This is just beautiful. Among all the bad there is a bit of good too. Wise words poetically delivered x

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Marion

Aw thanks Tina...many hugs to you my lovely friend ❀

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