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Death in waiting

Darkly, in the as it that turned sharply
Into cold and frosty air
She felt movement everywhere
And as her heart raced and the blood coursed through her veins
You could see her chest rise and fall in a panic like display
And she was nervous of what was soon to be
Would it be a blood letting horror story
In this place illuminated darkly by shades of crimson red
That signified an atmosphere of fear and dread
And as she made her way through corridors of bloodstained walls
She knew exactly as she walked into the big hall what was in store
A nightmare of pain and torture of endless screams and cries
The tension it was palpable as the scent of death started to rise
And sillhouttes could be made out vaguely in this hall of death
Where many people who had gone before took their final breath
And as she waited in anticipation she felt knife drive in
And as it pierced the skin the pain started to begin
And she could feel the pain and ruin
As the knife stabbed again and again
And as life started to ebb away as she saw the blood flowing
Down the concrete floor towards the drain disappearing
And she wondered what a waste of life and a horrific way to go
As life seeped away in the dark not fast but gradual and slow
To make the whole thing so much worse
She wondered and pondered that no one would know
And the perpertraters would dissolve into the night as all demons do
After enacting this horror show
And as she took one last look around
There was one thing she thought the night should know
If any other man treated her as bad they too would be the next to go
And as she liked the blood from off the blade
She walked away from her ex boyfriend real slow
So that he would realise you don't treat a demon so
And as he bled to death strapped in a chair from the multiple wounds
She laughed a laugh hysterical then vanished completely into thin air
Without a second thought of conscious care
This beautiful demonic beauty of who men best understand to beware
Because she will take your life in a blink of an eye if you dare
Mess or try to hurt her.

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Syd

Very descriptive and horrific. Better the devil you don't know. The boyfriend got his comeuppance. Good write. (You've a few typos in there as I often do on a first draft) I'll edit this comment later.

Nice to read from you.

- SydΒ 

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Fauxcroft

Thank you very much for reading, I think I have addressed the all now. Trouble with doing this all on a phone lol. Glad you liked it. Faux

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Fauxcroft

Glad you enjoyed it, I really appreciate thatΒ  FauxΒ 

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