Poem -
Incursion
In my pine forest of fragrance sweet!
Pine needles stand up in rows so neat.
They peek out of collected snowy boughs,
On majestic stalwart trees, inspiring vows!
Let me witness the woodpecker's stutter!
Or the tiny birds that tweet and flutter.
Feeling the crisp cold; and seeing my breath,
The taste of alive; in a scene mocking death!
Only glimpsing shadows of the snowshoe hare,
Watching river otters; and their dancing flair!
Bugling elks, the witnessed sacred view!
Eagle and Wolf, the stark symbols of true!
The Redwood towers of majesty and fame!
My heart hurts from man's incursion to tame!
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Comments
Beautiful poem Jim!
~Melanie
thank you for reading and your support Melanie!
What a beautiful, beautiful sonnet Jim!
thank you bunches Tina!
Beautiful and heartfelt write Jim and always a pleasure to read your latest.
thank you! Shaun
⭐️.
thank you
So beautifully penned. Jim you are a master of wielding words to nature. A truly lovely read x
wow Gwen! love that compliment! thank you for your kindness!
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awesome
thanks for reading Greg T!
Weaving wonderful words as always Jim my lovely lad ❤️😍❤️
thank you my weaving friend! your kindness is only exceeded by your charm!
wonderful poem as always
always a thank you Greg for reading!
Ow, Jim, I truly miss that kind of nature in The Netherlands😱😭. All I can do is run with the Wolves in the mind. The woods are shamefully tamed by government planning in the sparse space we have (way too many people per square mile (even though we live in the outback of one of the Southern Provinces). Love this peace and the rhyme - I am too much a free spirit to stick to rhyme and meter in poetry - it always ends up sounding as well as I can sing 😱😭
Keep it up!
Hey John! that place sounds really cool! thank you for reading and the uplifting support!
thank you sparrowsong for flying in and your support!
Great rhyming.
thank you Liliana my friend!
thank you JP!
Hi Jim,
You are a master of your craft -
enjoyed it!
Love,
Terry.
xoxo :)
wow Terry! that is a powerful compliment I will cherish!
Hi Jim! Long time no see my friend! Man oh man I love your nature writes, you really hit this one out of the park. How are you? I hope you've been well. Hoping to catch up more today, you have wrote so much since I have been gone.
hi Max! thank bunches! hope you are swimming strong!
Thank You Hj!