Poem -
A Memory Gone
Would you remember me
If tomorrow
I was gone
Could you forgive
My every flaw
And the things I've done wrong
Would you forget
My face and any trace
Of who I came to be
Would I be lost to time
A broken chime
Not even memory
Or would you love that thought
For what it's worth
Sustain my name
In gold
Portray the life
I lived in lights
A story centuries old
A fairytale of one who lived
Not with man and beast
But one who dreamed
With eyes that seemed
To see a world unleashed
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This poem carries the unmistakable imprint of Curious Onlooker, perfectly assembled verses to convey a story of a past memory that tries to remember, said Curious:
βEn el oro reflejan la vida. VivΓ entre luces una centenaria historia, un cuento de hadas que existiΓ³. No con el hombre y la bestia, uno que soΓ±aba con ojos que parecΓan ver un mundo desatadoβ
A greeting and congratulations on the poem.
Thank you Lucas, I was actually going to replace this poem but after seeing your comment I decided to put it back, I didn't have the heart to get rid of it, I appreciate your comment and kindness my friend, I'll visit your verses soon
CO
Smiles.........T xo
Hey Curious!!..........I don't know what happened on my other comment..........but just had to say..........that's one of the most beautiful poems I've read on here...........perfect..............well done brother!!...........T xo
Lol your presence is more than enough my friend thanks for stopping by, love the smile haha thanks T
CO
An author are never satisfied with their work and in their dissatisfaction always wants and seeks more. I agree with Tony Taylor, the composition seems to me to be very beautiful and the image that goes with it is amazing. A greeting and thank you for respecting my humble comment hahahahaha, saved you the publication life.
And in that rescue I thank you because, I am my biggest critic and don't know, when simple is simply enough, with that being said I try. Respects to a fellow poet with considerable talents should come naturally in my opinion :)
CO
Hello Curious...
This is another Awesome write...
Great Respect to a special someone...
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Thank you very much Sparrowsong, you are as kind as ever, once I get a chance to come on here for a while I'll be sure to see your new works I missed those :)
CO