insecurity

today,
another definition of yesterday,
same tittle but better story,
today awoke in the same manner,
sun rose in the same kente cloth,
so did the skies and heavens undress,
so did my consciousness dance,
to the same drums of yesterday,
yet today dares to be different,
my roots search for an anchor,
for fear of tempest,
one as strong as a oloruns crown,
time found you,
but questions awoke from emptiness,
what do you comprise of,
truly rock or a mere hard substance,
eternity would you last, or just swaying by,
is my presence felt or is me insignificant,
is sweat positive or just an exercise,
does our centre of consciousness meet or strangers are we,
one now and thousand to come,
wander for solvents,
wishes equal solutions,
may history be cast in deep cells,
never to resurface,
may love wear crown to king again,
may doubt rot as slave,
for all I seek is true tomorrow.
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Greetings Sonia,
Very pretty poem!! Accompanied by an extremely, keen sense of mind, to manipulate the usage of your characters, many encounters, through the compulsiveness of her repetitiveness, (socially unrecognized and socially unaccepted, unmentionable), (should be) emotion, (insecurity). Overcoming or the amends maker depends solely, on the span of accumulative, yet, (persuasive), amount of time. Consisting of the triumphs and failures of your character, through the many emotional journeys and mapped out emotional encounters, of her yesterdays, today’s and her tomorrows of her life forever echoing in this poem......
Jim
Thanks for the review and complement
You are quite welcome, really enjoyed the poem and choice of topic inked from the author....Great job..
Jim