Poem -
INVISIBLE THREAD
Cheekbones sink and hollow
dark brown eyes staring out
with bemusement
feel the force in her walk
stolid, yet passionate
like Venus flytrap.
No one sees, no one feels
two broken threads
going away from each other
hope of thread is gone
waiting for angels
take her to a higher plateau.
Soul woven into invisible thread
of violent communal perception
dangled between ocean and sea
pulled into the deep.
copyright © by LCYODICO
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Comments
Hey LEAH!!...... this is deeply moving in its depressing .......yet longing sense the "Thread" still exists......I Love the way you use words......... well chosen....... well crafted...... even though I'm not sure this was intended to speak to relationships or life itself........ compelling nonetheless........ALL STARS!!.... Love and ROCKETS!!.......T xo ?✳✴
Hi Tony, this was intended to speak different subjects ; health, relationship, life in general, and even politics ##I leave everything to your imagination ## actually, my intention was to focus on a broken relationship when it ends up hanging by a thread!! ## To be continued in my next poem ## it's too late now, local time 24:00
Thanks for your continued support!!
Oh! I am very sorry to hear that! Don't lose hope ###
Don't worry about her because she already freed herself from worry by definitely cutting the cord. The thread of Hope was worn out, but she finds her new invisible thread within her soul!
Thanks also for all your inspiring comments ##why are you not writing anymore? Are you definitely logging out Cosmofunnel?
Good luck and may the Lord bless you on your undertaking!!! You take care of yourself too Bro!!!