Poem -
Iris
Dark, dark, dark
To the old
as to the new
Unwrapped gifts
Messy ponytails
Sneaky gestures
Masking witness
Hallowed shrines
And to the loved
And lost
Look beyond yourÂ
MirrorÂ
For I have been
You
Longer than
YouÂ
Have been
You
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Hello SAYA!!......truly enigmatic stuff here as well as in your other poem......obviously full of meaning.....which I have yet to unwrap.....but you have great control over your phrasing.......why do I feel like I've visited the cemetery from this write!!??...........ALL STARS!!....a curiously interesting debut' piece!!......WELCOME to COSMO!!.....I look forward to reading more from you......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
Thanks :)
Love this write...not sure of your meaning only what it says to me...it is dark, threatening and cold x