Poem -
It All Finds Me
I don't look for hell
You see, hell finds me
Attracted so completely
But there is, no we
I hardly search for anything
And nothing finds me
I'm searching in the dark
I see there's nothing I can see
I'm fighting for my freedom
Finding freedom ain't free
The cost is through the roof
And every fee contains a fee
My fantasies are phantoms
Fanning famine on me
So I'm hungry for the fantasies
I've yet to really see
And I don't search for anything
It all finds me
Attracted so completely
But there is no we
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Comments
Brother I knew you'd finish it, but this far exceeds what I expected. I'd say you reached a new level of lyrical awesome. Keep on writing in your new found level. I will reach it someday soon.
Much love, NU
I'll be watching and waiting bro, thank you.
CO
Amazing work as always!! Love reading your words. I will always be a fan!!
Val ?
Thanks Val! I'll always be your fan too!
Your friend, Curious
Wow loved reading your work. Keep it up!
Sana :)
Thanks Sana, appreciate the feedback!
Much love, CO
Hey CO!!...... dude!..... this is music bro!!....... it reads like a lyric line....... batting the tennis ball back and forth across the net of words........ cool stuff..........ALL STARS....... smiles.........T xo
CO, well done....I agree with T, this reads like a song; and a good song as well, good flowing crisp terrific writing, my friend, I enjoyed this....cheers
Hi Curious Onlooker,
Great write. Metaphors, oxymoron's, alliteration, etc., you've got it all! A short but very powerful work. Oceans of thought in a mere poetic pond. Me likey!!
Peace and Love,
xox Larry