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It's Been a Tough Life

It’s been a tough life.
Not one of the childhoods where all you remember are the good moments,
But the type of childhood where all you remember are the bad moments.
And I’ve always wondered, what makes your childhood a good one?
Ā 
Somehow, I’ve made it here,
And there’s nothing I’m more grateful for.
It’s been a tough life,
But there was always something to lean on.
Ā 
Find the things that give you strength and hope,
Find the people that will give you what you need,
Find the ability to love and forgive yourself no matter what.
Only then, it’ll be a good life.
Ā 
Don’t let the world tell you who to be.
Don’t let the pain tell you to leave.
Don’t let your mind get the better.
It’s a good life and I’m stronger than ever
Because of it all.
Ā 

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Tony Taylor

Amen to that HELEN!!... you've made some great points here.... and well delivered in a compelling poetic prose & rotating verse!!.....ALL of the lines in those final two stanzas have a remarkable clarity & underlying stellar 'poetic advice'!!..... for me personally ~ " Don't let the world tell you who to be, don't let the pain tell you to leave!!"....... both phrases are VERY important to my life!!......thanx for that!!......ALL STARS!!....... well done..... and...... WELCOME to COSMO!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?ā˜€āœ“āœ³??

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Jason Brown

Excellent use of repetition to make your point and subtly bind the fabric of the poem together.

Welcome to Cosmofunnel.

J ;)

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linda wright

good write linda going forward is always most difficult but it is worth the effort

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