Poem -
ITS MY TURN
Communicating peace through the written word.
Chillin with my friends making music spitting verbs.
I'm straight from the trailer park wtf's the burbs?
Please excuse my shenanigans but i'm a bit absurd.
Been on the scene hitting green since the 3rd.
Started to pursue my passion and my people get concerned.
But I just remember to keep it regal, fly high like a bird.
They worry about me when its them that never learned.
Been mastering my craft behind the scenes, now IT's MY TURN...
...To release this madness to the world and achieve what i've earned.
(c) James Haynes
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Hey JAMES!!......VERY cool rhyme my friend......I know you're workin' on lyrics & this definitely has great flow...... backed up by a VERY important message......." Communicating peace through the written word!!..".....smokin' grooves brother poet!!.......ALL STARS...... well done.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo
Hey Tony T!! I just recently found this side of myself so i'm on this site checking out what kind of feedback i would get if i did decide to release something. But I really appreciate the feedback buddy it means a lot to me! along with the rest of the COSMOS FAMILY everybodys so nice and friendly i feel at home here at this site amongst all of the great writers I read on a daily basis. I Thank you Tony and the rest of the family as well!!