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It's Not You

It's Not You

It was late DARK quiet 

In old tired sleepy house 

My love she came to me 

Naked in that DARK quiet night 

Her nudeness casts off aurora light 

Spread her legs 

Like I was being invited for tea 

Simply bore a question do you want me?

Because I am yours 

Yours to be 

So free your man, and come inside me.

Passion blood flowed, and not to my toes 

I was all but almost free 

By what minute in all these years we've known 

Have you ever been this spontaneously easy?

Bad feelings kicked in the gut 

Tickled spine brought chills upon my neck 

The way you talk, the way moved

Oh what the....who the.....heck are you?

False beauty diminished 

Sinister succubus materializes before face 

As God my lord and saviour be free of this place,

She demon laughter is shrill in the ear 

Once again alone in the DARK, after creature dissappears 

Retiring to chambers I race 

Into my love's arms, Greeting me with a spread legged hugging embrace.

Shrill laughter, echoes, throughout DARK quiet.

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Devon La Porte

Thanks C, tis the dark imagination this stuff comes from and I thought making the succubus appear as the man's lover as an illusion to trick him. I put that that twist on the end was that really his love in the bed. Glad you liked this, men have been fed on for centuries by succumbing to lustful temptations, so I used a little common knowledge even though at first he believe. Much respect for you as well. 

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Bradford

Hey Devon I wished I came home to a succubus sometimes when I was married maybe that pain would have been alot less hurtful lol a great write. Rock

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Devon La Porte

I hear what your saying rock, after some time a man has needs but you want them to mean something for if not and you are out just to get feeling it makes you a machine not being able to share that passion, and rock really a succubus lol, they feed on more than just your lust. I know you meant man but your in a better place now man, and im happy for your future. Thanks for taking the time to read my into some of my darkness.

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