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" JESUS ~ GOD'S METAPHYSICIAN "

" JESUS ~ GOD'S METAPHYSICIAN "

He was designed of all mankind
A man of Metaphysics
To change the water into wine
And to walk atop the fishes
To heal the weakened princes
And walk among his peers
As though there were no reason to fear
The end of his life so near
Made mythical through his resurrection
To be the Metaphysical potential
And the God
In us all.....

Tony Taylor    (Chicago)
 

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Richard Waters

It is good that you can write your perspective on religion.Faith is a personal standpoint and should not be altered by those who take a differing stance ! The Clergy find much to debate about in terms of how faith should be perceived and accepted. Your write is fascinating as usual !

Wishing you all the best as always !  :)

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Christopher Correia

hey T, fascinating and superb write, my friend...yes to be honest a write like this will ruffle a few feathers, but sometimes 'good poetry' does that, sometimes 'diary entry' poetry is just written for the poet's thirst for vanity, who knows....I only know that I like this write, very much;  so par for the course, lol....to be honest I don't know enough about Meta physics to make a comment on it or associate it with Jesus, and I read sis. Cherie's comment; we share similar religious beliefs....I've read some strange perspectives on here that are opposite to my own personal beliefs, and I've kept my mouth shut.... honestly, I don't come on here to be 'converted' to anything; just give me 'naked good' words to ingest, lol...if a personal belief is wrapped in good to 'readable' poetry, I will read it, and perhaps comment; if I'm so moved....hey Tony, I know you to be a man of integrity who writes from the heart, what else can a reader ask for from a poet?  Keep stirring the pot in 2016, pal....poetry is highly subjective, and poets are generally vain; most people  like what reminds them of their own work; lol, just an opinion D

Keep kickin arse and takin names, me brother....and always remember; if I like it, it's good enough; tongue in cheek...later

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Tony Taylor

WOW MAMMA JAMMA!!!........I can't believe I missed this comment..........but I'm glad that I found it.........you're awesome my Bruvah!!..........I appreciate that you allowed me the room to be myself here without penalizing me for voicing a part of my belief system............if Jesus had NO metaphysical capabilities then he wouldn't have been able to perform those things that we refer to as miracles.......it's not meant to be a blow against the Bible or God in any way...........I figured I'd get some negative feedback.........but what the hell..........if you like ~ I'm ALL GOOD!! (smiles)...........thanx for this comment Chris..........much appreciated............Love and Rockets!!.............T xo

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Christopher Correia

T if my sole purpose on her is to be your personal 'blocker' then so be it, love your work, be yourself, do your thing; lol, I may not always comment, but I got your back...keep writing whatever you want, my brother,  you are  very relevant to me and many others  and you are growing; scary how good you are, no bs...looking forward

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