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Just a Few Things That Made Up a Day

Although as yet, we have not
been formally
introduced, or for that matter,
met in the flesh
so to speak, I have occasional
dreams, in which
you feature and wherein I play
a small supporting role ..
In the opening scene, you are
always wearing
a brand new, white bath robe ..
With your still
damp and sun-bleached, fresh
apple scented hair,
held loose, in a cool, matching
white towel ..
You are sitting, on an old straw
coloured rice mat
and have a bowl of fresh hand
picked cherries
nestled snugly, between your
feet and your thighs ..
There's a pink gecko lounging
on the ceiling
and outside one of the open
windows, a pair
ofĀ red and orange fire finches
areĀ singing, having been
woken and warmed by the sun ..
I note that the sky
is still perfectly blue, as it was
yesterday at noon ..
And cream, bronze and salmon
chrysanthemums
each dance and wave back at me
inĀ the lightest
of breezes, from a lime green pot
sat on our balcony ..

Ā 

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Neville

Yes, maybe .. and here was me just thinking you had a thing about vowels .. NevilleĀ 

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Rory McGinlay

Oh I do. I struggle with vowels. It's called a balanced sentence, I thought. Equal nouns to your vowels?

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Marion

Goodness Nev... if these are your daydreams then your actual dreams must be Exquisite. A visually beautiful work and what lady wouldn't want some charming man to have such fabulous thoughts about them x

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Neville

Thank you so much Marion you just pretty much made my whole bloomin day Ā šŸ˜ŽšŸ’›ā¤ļøšŸ“šŸ’šŸ·šŸŒ¹šŸ‘ x

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Mark Olcott

another classic by your pen. a beautiful valentine for sure.Ā 

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Neville

Many thanks Mark .. so very kind and likewise, muchly appreciated .. NevilleĀ 

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