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Just a fool

In the garden of dreams where the night blooms fade,
I wander alone, through the memories we've made.

Under the silver light of a melancholy moon,

I whisper your name, like a long-lost tune.I searched for a star in the darkened sky,

Hoping for a glimpse, a reason why.

But stars are distant, cold and cruel,

And here I stand, just a fool.Love's gentle touch, now a fleeting ghost,

Haunting the places where I needed you most.

I painted our future in colors so bright,

Now shadows dance in the pale twilight.In the echo of silence, where hearts once beat,

I trace your absence in the quiet street.

I built castles in the air, without a rule,

Now left in the ruins, just a fool.Time moves on with its relentless tide,

Carrying away the dreams we tried.

Yet here I remain, in this lonely duel,

Holding on to hope, just a fool.

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sparrowsong

Hello Chepe...

Things can make us feel like a fool?

I think a lot of it is just disappointments can add up...

We get to a point that taking chances get harder to want to take a risk especially, if the odds haven't always added on the higher end of the percentage scale...

Sometimes, 50/50 is not always a percentage that makes you just want to jump and say yes to...

Doesn't mean we're a fool...

Taking no chances at all makes us a...

Chicken?

Just my opinion...

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

sparrowsong

 

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The fish of the sea

Some awesome symbolism in this one. I especially liked... Incredible poetry.

And here I stand, just a fool.Love's gentle touch, now a fleeting ghost,

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