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just look at me

You said make it beautiful so this is me trying to do it so, a poet I am but unlike many others I never sell out, or climb under the covers and call it quits im the mystery man your mr. H self proclaimed. discoverer of the undiscovered, the professor of madness marveling your unparalelled boutique id clash with swords at anyone who would throw in my direction sour faces, could you just for just this one time look in my direction and smile, for it would make my day a brighter than so many others, and my heart would skip a beat a rum pum pum pum I wouldnt know what hit me but so filled with joy would I be at the becoming your own admiration so would you please look at me send me me please a reply

so I was on pof and wasnt getting very many replies at least not in my area and then this beautiful girl came up so I tried to woo her with poetry turns out shes not much for poetry because she never wrote back, so here I am because im quite proud of this one

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Tony Taylor

And well you should be friend!!.....Never read you before Tim Holtman (my  loss).......but you definitely have a gift for conveying emotional imagery...........love to read more..........well done.........excellent read brother!!.............smiles............T  xx

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Tim Holtman

Thank you tony sorry about the delay on the reply it warms my heart to know you enjoyed it

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