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JUST READING

JUST READING

Dear Diary...

Today I was heart broken...

Sometimes, I just don't understand why I can't...

Sparrowsong what are you doing?

Just reading...

That's nice...

What are you reading?

The book that was in your room...

Oh okay...

Wait a minute...

What book?

This one...

Sparrowsong that's my Diary!

I got that when I read...

Dear Diary...

I'll give it back later...

I'm at a good part...

Sparrowsong that's private...

I didn't see that anywhere...

You should write that then...

Can we talk?

What do you want to talk about?

Right here it says...

Today I was heart broken...

Sparrowsong I'm not going to talk about what's in my Diary...

You write stuff in a book like it's going to give you advice...

Who broke your heart?

Do you want me to clobber him for you?

Sparrowsong...

Yes?

Give me back my book...

​Hugs...

sparrowsong

 

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Tony Taylor

Hey FEATHERS!!.....I can't help but smile at this write...... that closing line "Give me back my book." is so subtly perfect that it made me laugh out loud..... such vivid imagery you've created in my minds eye...... I love your dialogue stuff...... you're so good at it!!......ALL STARS!!......a pleasure girlfriend!!.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo ?☀✴✳

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lodigiana

Hi Sparrowsong, this is such a familar dialogue! beautifully done- such an innovative subject matter too. Loved it!
Lodigiana xx 

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sparrowsong

Hello Tony...

Glad I made you laugh my friend!

Thank you for your kind comment and support!

Hugz and Smiles!
Love and Rockets!

Feathers

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Rose Sho

This made me laugh Sweet Sparrow...Well done!

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