" JUST THINKING "
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This is a rewrite from an earlier post
That needed a photo, just found;
JUST THINKING....
Sometimes I stare down at icy water, and feel
The cold
I do it so often I don't think I know, numb, anymore
I watch the flow, and combine my being
With the movement of the waters
And anticipate the rush of death, I'm in the moment
My pulse racing toward the idea of it
It's so strange to consider
That I actually consider, these bizarre illusions
The consciousness is not literally
Connected to brain activity
I feel the COLD in my mind
As I slow into nothingness and begin to dream
Of nothing at all
When suddenly, you touch me from behind
And I find, myself, on the railing of a bridge
Just thinking........
Tony Taylor (Chicago)
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Dear Brother Toney Taylor,
Superb write, I love it, specially the lines below, My applause, My love, My vote, Added to my favouirte
Love & regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
WOW Mr. Maveli, thanks so much for the FAV.....I really didn't think any one was going to see this........so glad it was you my brother.........big smiles my friend.........tony xx
Just pondering life from above. A peaceful one this time. Quite visual descriptions of the mood in the poem. Well done. Love G xx
Georgie..........thanks so much my friend............hugs-n-smiles.........tony xx
I love all of it and especially the way it ended.
."it's so strange to consider, that I actually consider, these bizarre illusions" .....resonates...I wonder if we have all had these illusions...I know I have
. "when suddenly you touch me..............just thinking"...then it just takes a little something to switch us back...
awesome Tony!!!
Hey Bahar, so glad you got a hold of this........I don't think any one got more out of this than you did.......I TRULY appreciate it........very personal write for me.....and you caught all of it's subtleties.........thanx sister girl...........smiles.............tony xx
yes, fortunately or unfortunately I know exactly what you are referring to. Hence, my nonsense play with words in my poem "a fine line". That's what I was referring to. It only takes a brief second to make a switch. Have a great Sat!