Poem -
Kiss The Dark
It swallows me
Like it swallows you
It depreciates and
Drags you through
Its worst point of view
It overshadows your weeps
With its own
Hollow screech
As it cries
Fall asleep
As its done to you too
A dreadful child
That you nurture
With tears
And black ink
It embraces with its
Illusory arms
And sad stink
But oh, of the times
When it's realm
Plays chimes
A calling to home
For lost and dark minds
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Comments
That is really good it's crazy how fast some writes are and you wrote that quick, definitely worth 5* awesome imagery it began as good as it ended.
I like to see poetry sometimes as a fast circulation of wind flowing and every so often words which become poems, and I believe that you must put your hand into the circulation swiftly or those words dissappear, that's probably why I was quick with this one, sorry for the long explaination haha, but thanks you have this onlooker's gratitude
CO
Hey Onlooker!!.........this is intense brother........I'm still re-reading this to catch your intent.........but........like a good mystery..........I will not stop until I understand.........there are so many compelling references to the darkness here........and the pic leads me to think of the "bad luck" associated..........wow!!........very cool stuff my friend..........well done..........Love and Rockets!!........T xo
I edited it brother reload the page lol
I like it even more lol! Now your just giving it some finesse.
Finesse makes for the best :), thanks for reading my friend
My mysterious friend...
Great Cat!
Your write I have to agree...
SPOOKY!
Awesome Curious...
Nothing like a Good Mystery on a Friday night...
sparrowsong
Oh wow CO, what a brilliant and dark write. Sense of inky silence from this. Well written!