La Portes
The sun is shy
Behind...
Confusions cloud,
Family rides
To the land of the loud,
Along the road a dark figured man
In a black gamblers hat,
Who wears a mask and hides it well.
Carrying his face in a brown leather case,
Daddy's saint behavior mistake
Was to pick him up.
Mother and father can hear my prayers
Through the look of telepathy stares.
Not reluctant in the craziness he shares
A sin eating smile, but eyes that look of cares,
We asked about his heading his reply was nowheres.
Sweet child laughter memories
Moments of pure love light fills the heart of mind
Flashes faster across the sentenced
When they have run out of time.
Black gambler hat unlocks brown leather suitcase
Says don't worry ill be nice, and puts on his real face,
Whispering im not that bad
Right son, daughter, mom, and dad.
I'm to deliver you as blood tax for the road
What an honor dear family that will be bestowed,
Pull the car over here
Give me your fear
Open your eyes to the doors
Be still upon forest floors.
Missing for days
A search party combs secluded wooded highways,
Looking for a trail to put them on the right track
Headlights illuminate a dark figured man who tips his black gambler hat.
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Wow D!!ย This is great man!!..........La Portes, in French, Spanish, Latin = "The Doors".............this is spectacularly good !!.........this is a short story in poetry.........a metaphysical glimpse atย the protection and destruction ofย family...........there is so much "symbolic Logic" in this piece that I have to applaud the depth and the research that went into this write.........I wish were there to high five you bro!!..........magnificent display of ideology vs. legend & lore..........I LOVE this !!ย ..........smokin' grooves brother!!........smokin' ass grooves!!..........ALL STARSย ย ย ย PINNED...........ttyl...........T xoย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย
T my man iam speechless by your comment. Im so glad you like my write, I have always been a Mojo Risen fan and what way to tribute him but to write a poem that was inspired by the song Riders On The Storm, and what makes it so much cooler using my last name which actually means the doors in French so glad you picked yhat up, you are a truly wise man. Theres a killer on the road. Appreciate the support man didn't realize what I really had, you really saw deep into that one. Much love to you brother.
MR. ย MOJO RISIN'!!!!!ย ย ........Jim used to live in my mom's neighborhood!!........we're ALL military brats.......looking for that ultimate ride..........whether it be "Riders on The Storm" or "La Portes" .....it's all a trip bro!!........why I'm so proud of you........is that you're leaping forward into this art-form........stay cool......T xo
Hi Devon . Inspired by Jim Morrison. ย Really how cool is that . I love the doors . Riders on the storm unto thein house were born their is a killer on the lose .great band great write all stars cheers hrl
Hardrock thank you man, if you like Jim Morrison he writes some cool and crazy stuff check out Lords And The New Creatures it is some interesting stuff.
Hi Devon I will check out lords and the new creatures . Hope you have a great thanksgiving . Cheers :)
Happy Thanksgiving to you and your family HRL.
gorgeous dark write Devon. I love your style!
XX Lisa
Hello Lisa, firstly I want to apologize and second off thank you for the comment. Don't know how I missed it. Glad you checked it out.....I just happened to come back and read it, maybeย a prequel in the mix? Love and peace to you.