labeled fatality no 103.
Unrecognized by my eye's i see
YOUR face laying helplessly
within your bed labeled fatality no 103
In critical care unit in the city
Yesterday we were laughing
Over a cup of coffee
How could this be
Your face i can still see
But yesterday you were
Communicating with me
Now to never awake again
You don't even resemble
My glowing best friend
They say that this is the end
I should have slowed down
" I didn't see that bend ",
Now your upon death,
I already took my final breath
Back at the accident scene ,
Nothing they could do for me,
I'd do anything to slow down
I couldn't see within the darkness
Or the rain,
I'm standing by your side,
Your family are all here,
I can't hold them
Nor wipe away their tears,
Watching their hearts aching
In pain ,
I'd do anything to rewind time,
Slow down within the rain,
Take it slow around that bend,
Remembering your laughter
Over coffee,
You always were my best friend,
I'm so sorry,
please forgive me ,
This heartache i can't mend.
Nardine Sanderson 21/11/2014.
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Hey Deano!!.....I don't know if this is true or not........either way it's compelling.........and sad........you know what I see in this........I see a poet that is experimenting so much.........that writes so much.........that's blossoming into a fantastic writer.........your word choices and combinations are getting so tight and feathery subtle,.........beautiful use of words here..........excellent write sister girl.........smokin' grooves!!..........smiles.......T xx
Heya sweetie pie, it came from the heart, sadly it's someone's reality, luckily not mine, i do get emotional around the loving season's, Christmas hits me hard, knowing many i car about travel the roads, i just want them all safe, people need to be more aware when travelling to place's they've not travelled especially under weathered circumstances, and traveling at night to get to where they wish to be, it all comes down to time and patience, i really can't handle the road toll as it rises at christmas and the new year, such a sad form of events, hopefully some of my messages get noticed somewhere somehow, our roads are only safe without people on them, sad to say,
anyway love you heaps and heaps, nardine xoxo
Nice work
Thank you Johnny for reading:) xoxo