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LAST FEW DAYS

LAST FEW DAYS

Breaks my heart to see you in this way 
Knowing that your health gets worse by the day 
I remember you once as a real go getter 
Now I wish I could make you better 

Must be hard knowing today could be your last 
Time catches up with us all so very fast 
When I reach your age how will I be?
Will someone be caring and look after me 

Throughout the good times and the bad 
You were my father and I was your lad 
And when the time comes for you to say goodbye 
I will look back on you fondly and continue to try

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sparrowsong

Hello Kieran...

Through all the time there is to love the last time to say it you is unknown to us...

​​​​​​May you have plenty of times...

Beautiful and sad write!

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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Terry Kay

Kieran, So sad and so sweet. Sorry for you - time goes by so fast.  I still have my mom she is 81 and my best friend. I think about losing her often these days.  BesutifBeau written. Bless You...

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KIERAN1369

Hi Terry 

Thanks for your comment 

What does " BesutifBeau" mean ?

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Terry Kay

Kieran1369, It's a type error was suppose to be beautiful. God bless...

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Audrey youde

So sad and heartfelt ,,written from your heart , its really beautiful,,

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