Poem -

Lawnsome

this is a perfect example of a Faikhu .. for any purists out there, almost very nearly a Mockhu

Lawnsome

Though much more a meadow than a lawn
Pray leave the grass alone she cried
Tis where my friends, wee beasties hide

Ā 

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RG

The grass is greenerĀ 
whether a meadow or lawnĀ 
on the Haiku sideĀ 

🤣-Rob

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Neville

How extraordinarily clever Rob, haiku very mulch inweed .. NĀ šŸ˜†

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Marion

Actually...for some of us tis true. I always brush the grass gently before I strim theĀ  edges of the lawn so theĀ  hedge spiders can vacate. I also rescue leaves and carrier bags from the middle of roads mistakenly thinking they are birds and small animals. And I'm not asking for a diagnoses...I already knowšŸ„ŗšŸ˜³šŸ„“šŸ˜†
Great write x

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Neville

You are indeed a good girl Marion .. a bit like me if you know what I mean .. maybe ........................................................................................ Oh' n ta for taking time to rake over this little scrib ... N x

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Marion

Ha ...not so much a girl lol and good...hmm...debatable these days, I just like every other species a whole lot more than humans ...even carrier bags šŸ™ƒšŸ™‚šŸ˜ƒ

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Gwendoline

Beautiful Nev, yes we should let nature just be. But we humans seem to have little respect for this lovely planet. Nicely done my friendĀ 

I can’t do any kind of ku, but I admire those who can :)Ā 
Gwen x

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Neville

it is such a shame isn't it Gwen .. that we, who so often consider ourselves to be the most intelligent species on this magnificent planet of ours continue treat it and other life forms with such contempt & disrespectfully so ..Ā 

Faikhu my very dear n lovely friend :) .............................. Neville x

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Gwendoline

It is very sad indeed my friend. I doubt it will ever get better, not until we start seeing ourselves as a global society at least. Working together to take care of this beautiful earth. We don’t realise how lucky we are to have the privilege of living hereĀ 

rant over lol...xĀ 

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