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let it go

In the midst of wind,

I stand alone, staring at the moon

wondering to return home

where nothing is felt sour.

all the time you grow it was never a smooth flow.

hurdles hurdles on the road , I am still confused

whether to walk right or go behind, hard for me to find.

walking through the road I realized so many people left behind.

It hurts to feel you grew up and life feels more screwed up.

as I look behind I am lost.

don't be tricked by your past. 

because you will  never achieve anything 

you will never learn to fly.

just be stuck by, let go of all things which makes you sigh

and learn to say goodbye.

And learn to rise like a fallen star, potential to achieve all the power.

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Tony Taylor

Hey SNEHA!!.....this is such an insightfully positive piece...... you can let your past drag you down..... or you can fly on the wings of positivity into your future........I like the rhythm and timing you've created here.........ALL STARS....... great message....... well done........T xo

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sparrowsong

Hello sneha...

Remember when some of the old was...

New?

On this path of the journey we're alone...

Then more and more...

We're not?

On a night when lots of stars are shooting across the sky...

I'lI race you?

Or maybe,  people will just know it's us? 

Two shooting stars coming down fast as they can...

Yup!

That's us!

LOL!

Positivity while we're still on the ground...

All this to rise up...

To come crashing down again?

Great write! 

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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Jai Masters

Heart; all heart, 

this was a strong piece for my heart. 

Luv from JAi:) 

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