LIFE
Everyone has a battle to fight, some may be physical while most may be mental.
Tough battles make tough people.
You can't expect yourself to be a tough person if you have never had a tough battle.
You have had many battles to fight and you will most likely fight some more.
You could have given up your battles the moment you received them,
But you chose to fight on like a brave soldier.
You really can't give up your battles because then you won't fight long enough to have them end.
When you have a battle you have the choice to let it kill you,
Or to let it get the best of you.
You also have the choice of fighting your battles bravely no matter how scared you may be.
If you ever want to see a symbol of strength, look in the mirror.
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If this poem has in any way made an impact on you, please let me know. If you have any sort of tips for me, please let me know, I am 14 years old, I'm not very experienced. I hoped you liked my poem! :)
~~NICCOLETTE
I think the content of your poem and the meaning are both great and profound. Its good writting, the only suggestion is to practice Rhythm in your writing. It helps to read a lot of poetry styles and incorporate those techniques in your own writing and see what others to to give that flow, that life and force, in their writing. Hope that helps any.. GOOD JOB though!
Thank you very much, I will usually put rythm in my poems thus is one of mh only ones without rythm.