A great couple of lines! Personally, and this IS only my opinion... b u t I think if you finished with a question mark instead of a full stop it would make your wonderful musing even more powerful. And I am only saying this because I really like what you have written, so please don't think I am picking holes... I'm not... It's just what I personally felt when I read it. But you wrote it... Your choice.. And I will like it regardlessΒ x
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Short and sweet. Love it x
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Great words, short and sweet and to the point.
Thanks you @sarfraz
No truer a verse has ever been stated!
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A great couple of lines! Personally, and this IS only my opinion... b u t I think if you finished with a question mark instead of a full stop it would make your wonderful musing even more powerful. And I am only saying this because I really like what you have written, so please don't think I am picking holes... I'm not... It's just what I personally felt when I read it. But you wrote it... Your choice.. And I will like it regardlessΒ x
Aww thank you.
i appreciate your input.
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As time ticks downΒ
and we scramble around,Β
It's possibly our kindness andΒ
understanding of our previous blindness.Β
That will see us through.Β
NigelΒ
This is the truth.
Learned lessonsΒ
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Powerfully succinct!!β¦...The truth ALWAYS works!!β¦...ALL STARS!!β¦...WELCOME to COSMO SWATI!!β¦β¦.LOVE & ROCKETS!!β¦β¦.T xoΒ : )
Wow Thank you and for the welcome ?? ?
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