Poem -
Life Flows
Life.
Flows.
Eddies.
Whirlpools.
White rapids.
Navigation
difficult.
Observe.
Evolving
quickly.
Most
oblivious.
Look away.
Stay
in their
lanes.
Doing
their
jobs.
Don’t
want to
know.
Don’t
care.
Hoisted.
Change
hoisted
onto
their
heads.
Changing
lives.
Forcing
unwanted
directions,
outcomes.
To late,
damage
done.
Should
have
looked.
Should
have
cared.
Oblivion!
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Comments
John
What is cool about this is, When I read your poem I did not bother to read the title before I began reading. After reading I immediately said to myself "what a great description of that Life is!" Incredible poem. This is a masterpiece brother. Love it! I know you might not get recognition on Cosmo, but on talent recognizes talent. Bravo!
That’s very kind of you Greg.Â
Thank you
John
Very good--and "Oblivion" is spot on & a great end to this poem.
Thank you Tomcat