Poem -
Life Lease
A gift from above
Made with love
Life to be had
To bad it was sad
Hard to deal
Never feeling healed
A messed up head
Thinking alive or dead
Can't do it anymore
Hell what life has it store
Not saying Goodbye
But It's time to fly
Now time for peace
Life treated like a lease
Wait why so many tears
They didn't know about my fears.
They shouldnt feel sad about my leaving
Im at peace and they are grieving.
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Hi ABAKER!!....this is a VERY creative dive into the melancholy that precedes those moments when suicide becomes a serious option for the depressed mind ~
~ " A messed up head
Thinking alive or dead
Can't do it anymore
What life has in store.."
I REALLY like the way you formatted this piece...... it adds To the flow of the rhyme scheme.......I pray that this is a fictional look at depression and suicide!!..... regardless, stay strong dear poet sister........ words and self expression can be a healing tonic!!....... much Love to you!!...... smiles.......T xo
Hi T
Thank you !
Past feelings but sadly not past for everyone so maybe a different way to look at it.
Very much appreciate the feedback :)
Much love & happiness
*A*
The sentiment is expressed so well.
I love this short verses too