Poem -
Life Is Like Limbo
Life is funny
Life is money
Life is like a small light
That you see from a distance
Beckoning you to the fold
But as you get close
You'll realized it was false
And get left in the cold
Life is nasty
Dirt covered creatures
Plot the downfall of their enemies
Which just so happens
To be of the same species
Life is like
The last cry of a tragic death
Life is like an unnecessary element
Life is like realizing
That the beginning of this poem is irrelevant
Life is like a whole cesspool
Of individuals in complete denial
Claiming that they understand life
When life is like the dull side
Of a two sided knife
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Curious, innovative poetry man, this write moves on a course that was impossible to predict; delicious! I hate starting to read something and guessing where it's going to take me, and being right; definitely not you my friend, creative, and fresh; like life should be....superb write
Thank you very much for your words of kindness, I appreciate the sentiment for being unpredictable is a trait that most crazy people possess and I aim to be a loon, most great individuals are haha but no thank you..really, I'm always glad to hear some feedback from those who read my poems
CO
Curious Onlooker is a viewer that is always very attentive to everything that happens to her around and because of that can write poems as accurate and interesting as this.
Life is like a coin of iron that has his face and his cross, lives in the distance, in the vicinity and can also be seen, consists of heat and cold, lie and truth, life is an orgasm and a cry of the heart-wrenching at the sight of death, life is like a black hole where the individuals live in a complete denial , in short, life is a knife of double edged sword that hurts and can kill.
I love the poem, hell or heaven, cold or heat, simply a limbo to wait. A greeting