Poem -
Life's Struggle
Days gone so fast
I wonder how this will last?
Helpless and tired
Lied down and cried.
Wish i could go back
But days,times are lack.
Letting go is my option
I should get up,get things in motion.
New doors opening
Could this be a new beginning?
I can see the light
The light that's so bright.
Things are not falling apart
Change is always a good start.
When you lose your best
God always take the rest.
Life always gives you trouble
Not once,sometimes double.
But one thing is for sure
Your bigger than any struggle.
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Comments
Hey, Roni.
Welcome to Cosmo.
Good aabb rhyme scheme with lots of slant and near rhyme substitution. That's okay if you can get away with it (I never can!).
But, hey, let's face it. One of the greatest classic poets of all time–Emily Dickinson–used slant/near rhyming all the time in her poetry, so...
Good stuff, well expressed.
~Dean Kuch ☠
Thank you....well appreciated☺
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