Poem -
~ Live Again ~
There's no need to ever admit
That I was here...
Take up the banner of your life
Hold it low, never reveal the good things
That you know
When you wake up, on the other side of life
Be sure to let me know
If what I experienced here
Was real, or just a show
There may be a way someday
To take you into what I know,
What you WILL know,
Someday....
So remember me as the man
Without a ticket for the show
Discounting all the things I've done
The very things that brought me low
So,
Drink in the waters of my soul
Remember me to the best of men
Retell the stories my friends have told
And let me live again....
For, there are always answers,
In the end...
Tony Taylor
May, 2022
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Really good write, I especially So remember me as the man
without a ticket for the show that's profound Linda excellent !
'If what inexperienced here
Was real, or just a show'...
says it all for me Tony.
I often think we are just one big entertaining show for....whoever.
'For, there are always answers,
In the end...'
I hope so Tony, cracking write x
You go boy
love and trumpets
I love it when i read and admire someone's writing which makes me reflect on how i treated this same subject which of course is very dear to our hearts. You have written some beautiful lines here "So remember me as the man without a ticket for the show" is a stunner.
Sophisticated write as always Tony. 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
You wrote an amazing piece I love it !
gave me chills because it’s great!
from a poetic perspective, this has got the lot & then some .. well penned my friend .................................... Neville :)
Excellent and beautiful write all woven into one.
Not a poetry word out of place so finely crafted and Tony a pleasure to read.
Full deserving honours and I hope all is well.
And admire very much that key emphasis on the word will.
All the best to you my friend and thank you for sharing.