Loneliness Part II
I am drowning in sorrow,
Overwhelmed with this pain.
I'm so far behind,
Forward progress seems, forever in rewind.
One step forward, two steps back,
This loneliness I feel, is a matter of fact.
Hiding behind this smile,
It seems just a distant mile.
I want to start over,
But its always a false summit,
I'll never make that wanted peak.
The odds against me are very real,
It also seems overwhelmingly stacked,
This corner I'm in, no one at my back.
This death I seek will set me free.
This loneliness is forever me.
I stand alone, this feeling can't be realer,
Loneliness is, this silent killer.
I'm sorry my friends,
I loved my wife,
I can't live this life, no more with this strife.
This one is for you, my one, my only, my dear wife.
Loneliness is a silent killer.
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Sad, :(, good write, the heart hides many sorrows, you become an actor of heartache, faking smiles, to be left alone unquestioned,
much love xx Nardine
When I write, I write with emotions to be able for my readers to fully understand what I am feeling, and maybe they might be able to have a glimpse in to the heartache and pain that I feel. Thanks Nardine, I am glad you like it.
I love it because i can relate, hope you are well within yourself dearest jerred Coleman xx
I am, with my ADD I just reach out and grab the first words that come to me, this is how it turns out, lols.
I only ask because, you speak strongly from your heart, in this write, you call upon your own death, as a shadow play, with is a huge part of grief, ( as long as you are healing on the inside) your writing is deep, never give it up xx much love to you Jerred Coleman xx
There are like hundreds of me, inside my head all yelling different things, I just grab the ones who yell the loudest, I feel like robin williams, not knowing what is going to come out but I just go with it.
Very emotional, I love your work
Well done
Maddison