Poem -
Lonely
Life is to much
Never easing up
Should I just give up
Can I survive?
See my pride won't let me say I need a hug
A broken heart from misplaced love
Has me skeptic of the touch
Afraid I might get a rush
Than your feelings start to rust
I need blessings from above
It's me against the world!
There's no one to trust...
Lord it's been so tough
Than learned myself was quite enough
I've fallen down so many times
Now realize I can pick me up
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Comments
I love the last four lines!! Excellent write. 5*s
Val ♥
This is a song Z?...Very cool........Love the movement and the message........I'm a songwriter by profession..........so when I realized that this was a song my first thought was.......God, I'd Love to hear this..........do you write on Piano or Guitar?.........regardless.......this is a VERY well crafted piece my friend............well done...........ALL STARS.........T xo
It is, I'm almost done with it I just have to tweak the recording a mix the final version. I actually don't play any instruments but I'm learning to play the violin right now I just started
And thank you for the love, it means a lot, positive feed back like this helps me not give up on my craft, it's much appreciated
Hello Zombie...
Love this!
Welcome to Cosmo!
Thank you for sharing...
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