Poem -

Lonely Me.

Alone i sit by myself.
Alone i talk to myself.
I think deeply about my life.
Asking why it’s such a lonely life.
In the early morn no birds do sing.
On a sunday morn no church bells ring.
I awake alone and retire alone.
Happiness from me has long long gone.
This life for me is getting me down.
Sadness over me does wear the crown.
Alone i sit and alone i cry.
Alone i know i will alone die.

 

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Katina Woodruff...

An Effective Poem! 

Favorite line 

 Happiness from me has long long gone.

I could sense the longing and sadness of the character. He is just hanging on to life waiting for it all to end. This is a perfect poem that describes loneliness. What are the solutions for this feeling? Maybe it's finding new hobbies, new connections, new friends and new poetry! I think there should be an online platform for lonely people (oh, wait, there is one, Cosmofunnel!) and Face Book of course.

I still get lonely though, even with all the online connections. Face time is much more appealing and beneficial I think. 

I liked the story, although it was sad, it's a real epidemic for our vulnerable groups in our society, the elderly most affected. The internet was a blessing in disguise, it brings us together through media, art, poetry, news and it's interactive. 

Great poem. 
I'm becoming a fan. 

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