Poem -

look into loveing eye´s

i love you i do 

i just want to say it was always you , 

your pretty smile it lifted me up,

in my tormented life that i wanted to cut  , 

you saved me in a way i couldent dream of ,

and your way was pure simpel love,

but now i stand and i know what i am waiting for  ,

my darling is ill the cancer is going to take her , 

you saved me from my self now  what can i do ?

you made me a better man but i dont know how to save you , 

holding hands look into loveing eyes, 

and with that we said our goodbye´s,

my darling how i miss you i will miss you day and night ,

and although you are no longer here in my heart i am hugging you so tight ,

writen

by

 paul o carroll  

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Tabi Porter

This is a beautiful play of words. Very vivid, and heartfelt. Great job.

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Louise Carroll

This gives write made me feel happiness, saddness and hope. Happiness when you both meet, saddness of course when sickness robbed you of this beauitful person and hope in the human race and love. Thanks Paul. Well done and best of luck with this in the comp for January. 

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Paul Carroll

thanks louise for your kind words and i am glad you liked my poem, xxxxx

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