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LORD...

Lord...
​​​​​Let the hurricane rip me apart
Let the volcano cover me in ash
Let the lightening pierce the soul of me
Let the tornado shake up my heart
To feel again, Lord
Let the numbness
Depart.
Marion Price (2019)

 

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Violet Freese

I can relate perfectly to this and the intensity it radiates.  I have been numb especially after my husband died.  Now my dog Bouncer suddenly fell ill with intestinal hemmoragic syndrome. So the way you describe the volcano and all the rest is exactly what I have been feeling I almost prefer numb... No because then I wouldn't have loved and been loved as I was by him.  He was 4 months but I got him at 4 weeks and we were never apart.  Love and light to you
violet 

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Marion

I have been in this place also Violet, it took me nearly ten years to recover, but I did recover. So will you my friend, though it may feel as though you never will at the moment. One of my most traumatic losses was my dog Amber, German shepherd, my soul mate who left too soon and without me by her side. I will never forgive myself and will Mourne her forever. I am so sorry about your husband. Write, write and write some more Violet, it helps ...hugs ? ?

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