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Losing Everything

Losing Everything

Can you imagine your life stopping 
Without warning just suddenly & final

There’s nothing you can do to change it back

There’s nothing to help you understand what to do

Everything you lived and breathed for

Everything you loved and cherished

In a blink of an eye is now no more 

Suddenly you are standing there all alone

No noises from daughters and grand babies 

No conversations with a beautiful wife 

Echoing off the walls that had witnessed it all

Years of working , loving & growing as a family

Making memories for 2 lovebirds to talk about as they age

when all the young ones had grown and left the home

Now just when things started calming down

And we could finally see light at the end of the tunnel 

Our future brighter than ever and our love growing even stronger

After our first twelve years of falling more and more

In love with each passing day and every beat of the heart

Just 5 min ago I said I love you and you said I love you to

Who would’ve thought they would be our final words

Who would’ve thought after 12 years of an fairy tale marriage

On this autumn night in October that my entire life would stop

That the foundation we had built against all odds

Would cease to exist forever more

The boy that you had made into a man

Would now be lost forever without a way

Eyes once shining bright with a glow

Now faded to darkness and now guided by demons

Just to escape the pain

 

Darrin Rodgers

09/06/2012

 

 

 

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Darrin Rodgers

My wife of 12 years died suddenly & unexpectedly in my arms at 10:00pm on a Friday night on October 12 , 2007 I was traumatized to say the least. I was 35 years old , a mechanic in textiles, lived in a brick house on 65 acres out in the country. I had 2 beautiful step daughters and 2 wonderful grandsons in  which due to the darkness I turned to just to escape the pain and stay alive I also lost on that night. The events that took place that night play over & over in my head every single day for the past 16 years. I'm happy to say I've finally found love again and found the light again through the darkness. The intention of this poem is to help anyone who has met their soulmate never take them for granted , don't waiste one sec over arguments or worries just enjoy the beauty and blessing of true love.

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sparrowsong

Hello Darrin...

I'm so sorry...

You give hope that you can love again...

​​​​​When you're in your 30's I think in ways it's different when you're in your 70's...

There are stories of people reconnecting with someone they knew decades ago and they marry at 100 and 99...

A brand new love and you're ready...

​​​​​​That's a present...

​​​​​​Congratulations!

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

Best wishes and blessings...

sparrowsong

 

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Marion

Death kills more than the deceased...difference is survivors face a living death ...hugs x

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S.zaynab.kamoonpury

A sad elegy poem like dirge recalling a sudden loss of loved spouse aww, must've been hard to bear. What was the cause of demise?. Kudos for this memorable memories sentimental poem. Condolences as well.

Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
 

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